RAYS STRIKE

Saffron rays strike the green grass
Toothless white dews smile in mass
Dawn chorus during Flower hoisting
Birds enjoyed Independence with lad & lass

August 15, 2016

15 august poem, 15 august poem for Indian kids, dawn chorus, Happy INDEPENDENCE, INDEPENDENCE Day of India 2016, India, India 2016, Nature poem on INDEPENDENCE day, poem on nature

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10 responses to “RAYS STRIKE”

Simona Prilogan says:

August 15, 2016 at 7:57 am

Happy Independence Day! Wishing you all the best! 🙂

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- SAN_jeet says:
  
  August 15, 2016 at 8:14 am
  
  Thank You
  
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kiranmag says:

August 15, 2016 at 8:44 am

There should have been green grass below to show the perfect tri colour

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- SAN_jeet says:
  
  August 15, 2016 at 8:47 am
  
  Ya, But Dawn chorus was most important thing that’s why selected this
  
  Thanks for true comment
  
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  - kiranmag says:
    
    August 15, 2016 at 8:48 am
    
    Never mind☺…have a nice day
  - SAN_jeet says:
    
    August 15, 2016 at 8:51 am
    
    Have a nice weekend
  - kiranmag says:
    
    August 15, 2016 at 8:52 am
    
    You too ☺
Prakash Hegade says:

August 15, 2016 at 3:30 pm

Very nice depiction of tricolors.. 🙂 Nice one.. 🙂

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- SAN_jeet says:
  
  August 15, 2016 at 3:33 pm
  
  Thank You PH
  
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Malctg – The Foureyed Poet. says:

September 2, 2016 at 5:40 pm

Hi SAN_jeet Nice words and photo Thank you for liking my poem “Sky People!” Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.

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